CheveLoco's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic t. Swordsman Ep.2]

nice movie..

One of the best sprite movies i have seen, u did a great job so i'll go right away to the things i think you need to improve on.

1.The clarity of backgrounds, maybe it would be a good idea if for your next episode you should trace the backgrounds so they wont look so blurry at times.(also i think you should redo the one where we get this view from behind sonic, it looked all cut out)

2.Try to avoid the hand drawn stuff, it just doesnt look good doing a sprite movie and add something you drew to it(blood,tears,etc)it just feels out of place.

4.Pay more attention to ur perspectives, that last one with the robot army could've been better

Like i said a really nice movie, and well it's funny how i wasn't the only one that thought having an army of enemies would be cool...lol

[Chaos Emerald Z: Trailer]

wow..

how can it be a whole new story if it just follows the dbz story?...animations are poorly done and to top it off...u havent even heard of sounds compression...

[FF7: About Random Battles]

graphically amazing

as all your movies..but that was pretty much it...i didnt find it funny at all..or entertaining..i "had" to watch it all to try to write a fair judgement but at times i wanted to just close the window...compared to the rest of your movies this one is subpar...and the score...well...it's expected because the movie it's done by you....but i don't think it deserves it...you have done way better than this...

[Super Mario Friends]

let's see

i am going to point out the stuff that i think u need to improve on..

first the Mario RPG part...you should've made the background bigger so we woulndt have to see the horrible white background on the back...

second...mario walking over the stuff in the background..with some layer work..you could've made it seem like he was actually walking on the background and not over it

third..frame rate...in my opinion it was too slow and made it look choppy at times..

fourth...mario rpg backgronds...usual 2d mario...didnt look good

i hope that helps...

[Project X Part 1 Preview]

lookie here...

well it has the same name as my old series...but i'm glad the similarties end there...i wish this preview was more animated because well...everything was too stiff...oh and work on your female characters cuz the blonde one i thought it was a guy...at least that's what i wanna believe unless they're gay...

Lord-Sonx responds:

the female was basicly an edited versionj of the guy... this will be changed in final...

[Mario's Allstars]

work on it more...

first of all i think u ruined a good song(7 NATION ARMY) didnt even play it all..and just in case you didnt notice before uploading it..the whole thing it's out of sync since the very begginning...and when it looks like it's back on track. it goes out of sync again! add to that the poorly traced sprites(you left some white spots that look just bad) and bad animation and you end up with a big mess...

airdevil responds:

do i care what u think????? NO!!!!!

[Super Mario Ball Z]

too choppy..

the whole thing was way too choppy..i guess the frame rate you used was too low...the sound could be better too..it just sucked...originality..well there's none being a DBZ parody..i also think thi was pointless and sometimes even boring..i hate to be clicking on the text to go forward...and the ending....well...

[Dinosaur Jr. ep.01]

hahaha....

why justin??..i thought the world had gotten rid of him...lol...i wanted to be the first one to review it but oh well...nice job..i like the animation and character designs...and the voice acting too..maybe u can helo me voice one of the characters of my series...good flash!

JacklandStudios responds:

anytime you want man :)
I'm really glad you liked it

Thanks a lot

-J

[Pup'N'Kolo ep 1]

it was pretty funny..

although kind of gross..lol...you know..it reminds me a lot of my characters rolo and kino..hehe..good job

[Dark, and alone 5]

sorry but...

no offense or anything but this wasn't worthy of getting a daily award(well can't blame u for that, nothing better came out during the day which is a shame)...

nothing besides the music stands out..nothing but doors opening and closing and dull art...i guess everyone can win an award in a lucky day...